Dark as i have put him is the better half of me, he is the one who always tells me what is right and what is wrong. He usually is refered to in his own person because he is sorta like my Conscience...he tells me the obvious but i still go ahead and do it.

I gave him a name...i know it is stupid but i guess i just am different from everyone else...least i didn't name my...well you know.

Dark is always the one i turn to because i don't have very many friends and i truely mean that...i have four friends i consider friends...that's about all.

So usually i am stuck writing poems, i just wrote this one while i was at work sitting here and typing it out on the keyboard. If you would let me know what you think i would really appreciate it.

Very Nice Write, Shaun. Sad to know about all this.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

Well i think i know what this is about, i hope your good........

I liked this and the fact that you named him isn't stupid it's unique and different..... I know what you mean, your conscience tells you things that are true and yet you ignore it, i know coz i also do it:)

This is sad but very well written and i loved it.5*
I hope your ok and thanks for your comment!

Tash

I don't think I'm a facade nor my love for you was either, but you can parade it how you want to cheer yourself up. I already told you if you could just depend on and love yourself, Maybe I'd come back to you.....

Love you,
Heather.

okay...Shaun, I wanted to try and be kind with you, but I need to learn to not hold things in any longer. Okay, your poetry...is not, poetry. It's a page full of rhymes. C'mom "too, glue, do"...ever thought of something more complex? At least, I do. You can dislike my poetry, it doesn't pain me to see that. But when you come off with your egotistical manner of "I can write anything if I can type or have pen and paper." ..... I'd love to compete with you in front of professionals, although I can still beat you in the amateur judges race. And oh, don't worry, now I know you love yourself....a little too much! And I'll tell what I please to whomever I want.

Love,
Heather.

Ps. I AM VERY HAPPY WITH WADE! we are together so much, and I don't believe in straying from him b/c he's a person just like me, full of fear for depending on people, and falling in love, so we're at a mutual level. And why would I run back to you if I could have someone tangible & beautiful inside and out.

There was someone in TN that loved , still loves you too but I just let you go for your own good but if you lift yourself out of your pathetic naivety, you'd see the justice unveil itself from your eyes.

I believe that this place wasnt made to talk about personal things,i read the poem ,created my own picture and when i came to comment i was completly distracted didnt know what was goin on !

honestly i don't know what to say.
i will come back to read it again sometime later.

much Respect,
Rua Francis.

Creative...I think you did a great job....

"Dark was there to wipe my tear, pull my away from beers."

^ I believe it should say "...pull me away from beers."

If Dark really is your better half, then I guess I'm glad he's there to help you...

Wow this is excellent

Wow this poem is Wow. it's something millions can relate to, and Maybe even put a lot of thought into actualy listening to themselves once in a while. Great wrk!

5/5

This really makes me think of my last relationship or whatever me and him are now. Actually, I think about all my relationships with family and friends too. Theres a voice in my head that tells me a million times what I'm getting myself into. But sometimes, even though we know it wont work out we want to at least try. Sometimes the consequences are not exactly clear at the time. How are we supposed to know in the first place right?

Then there are sometimes that we listen to the voice too much and we skipped out on a good chance . With whatever happens with any decision we make, it only helps make our person.

Thank you for the write. I enjoy your poetry and thanx for commenting mine.