The broken and used

by hilary   Apr 30, 2005


You said you loved me and that it was true
and i trusted you , i believed you
and then for the first time we broke up
and behind the second there was more stuff

you convinced me that you wouldn't hurt me
and again i believed you, i trusted you
then the next day i had second thoughts
and then i ended it, sweet and soft

of course you didn't care because it was all lies
you didn't love me it took long to realize
that all you wanted as a piece of @$$
its a blurr to me now , it happened so fast

now I'm tired and i feel so damn used
my tears hit the ground as my heart blows a fuse
you said you loved me and that it was true
and i trusted you, i believed you

and i sit here and cry,
knowing someday my tears will dry

you might think its out of order but here is the rhyme scheme and the syllable usage

AABBCDDEEFFGGHHII

and the syllable usage .. 9-10

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  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    I loved it i understand you thanks for commenting on my poems!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Nicely written, very well done.

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love, Amit.