Excellent job and beautifully written. hugs, love, *Ann*

This was good it left me feeling the complete loss and you did well with creating that image in my head. I would change some of the little i to Big Is though other then that it was good...

Very well written and expressed! Keep it up girl! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

Really expressive poem, well done, keep it up :) good work :P

excelent poem of passion and forgiveness 5

your really good keep writing

Sweet Amanda, please don't feel like this, please don't be sad!!! this poem expressed so many feelings and emotions and I feel your pain!!! I hope that you are ok??? You know I'm here for you...

*Love sabrina*

Hey sweet Amanda!!! My boyfriend just told me that you were on msn yesterday AND HE TELLS ME NOW!!! Hmm, I don't think that he'll do that again =0) ha ha he wouldn't dare....Well I hope that we can talk soon, cause I really wanna know if you are ok??? Is that girl still bullying you???

Love always Sabrina

Okay, what's happening with MSN??? I can't log on!!! I had the same problem last night, when I tried to log on....So sorry if you thought I wouldn't talk to you....

Hugs Sabrina

this seemed to not flow as well as your others I would have used different words in some parts but it was a good read just need abit of spit shine revision maybe next time. Take Care...