That was original and thoroughly written, I enjoyed that write. Keep writing,
Satuxxa

I'm always blown away by the intelligence and thought that is put into your poems. Very nicely made.
-A

Good poem. short but good. thnx for commenting on mine. .

Cliched ideas are okay if you handle them well and you did =) I loved the whole idea of this. I've always believed maturity rises from experiences, not from age considering why half the time I look at my generation with such hope because of their idiocy. But mind you, you are well above your age in maturity. I think you are a really talented intelligent individual. Stay in touch. 5

Love,
Heather M Craig.

Beautifuly Worded, I Loved How It Flowed I Can Relate To It 100% Great Job On This One 5.0 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Well Done,

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

that is soo inteligent. creapy!!! i like it. if i understood it, i'd probably like it better, i like it though.

It is true.maturity is not by age but by mind.