Found

by Alissa   May 2, 2005


Wandering around cold and alone
Not sure of who I am so I moan and groan
Attention is all we are after
So we pretend everything is alright and cover it up with laughter
We just want to be what we see on TV
Thinking our lives will be better but thats not the key
So we look in the mirror and judge right away
We don't like what we see or what people say
We know what we want and that is perfection
But that isn't what we see in our reflection
We try to conquer something that is out of our reach
Beauty is on the outside thats what we teach
Just remember your beautiful no matter what
It doesn't matter if your "hot" or have a nice butt
Keep your head up and never get yourself down
Because if you believe in yourself your inner beauty has been found

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki Pixie

    The poem is true on most lines except for the part about everyone wanting to be hot. I don't want to be hot. I don't want to be ugly either. I want to be normal.

  • 18 years ago

    by FAKE-is-the-new-trend

    that was a great poem! its so true to..we always wanna be hot and we don't look inside others.I hope you write a lot more so i can read them
    and thanx for commenting my poems!

    bye,
    shelly

  • 18 years ago

    by sinister

    5/5 very good. thanks for your comments. i was wondering if people picked up on that i'm a guy. i just tried something different. if u liked that poem read "Imagine, just imagine" and tell me what you think of that one. i'm intersted in your views. thanks bye.

  • 18 years ago

    by Pianist

    a very true and profound statement. A little cliche, but still true. I can honestly say I didn't expect much when I read the first few lines, but it turned out not half bad. Read some of my work if you get the time.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hillary

    alissa- you are a very good writter you should really keep it up! luv ya much- ( oh dont worry i know the girl so its ok if i tell her i luv her cuz shes the best)

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