One True Friend *For Beck*

by Ashlee Nicole   May 3, 2005


Through all the choas,
And All The pain,
Through all the suffering,
Through all the Rain.
That one person,
That was always there,
That one person
That will always care.
I can cry in front of you,
With no need of shame.
I've cried for you,
For I can feel your pain.
I want you to know,
That I'm always there.
Many years down the road,
I'm not going anywhere.

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  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Aw this is so sweet! i love to read about friendships ....good luck w/ everything ...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good ,flowed good and had great meaning to it

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    I think this ones very sweet,
    i can relate to it for me and my friends it basically the same, i like reading it, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I love that you write not for yourself but for others its really a beautiful thing.

    the only advice i have is maybe try to enhance your vocanbulary in this poem i think simplicity was key but sometimes its nice to use bigger deeper words i dont think it takes much to rhyme words like
    pain-rain
    there-care
    there-anywhere

    rhyme scheme was lost in certain areas as well

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Amazing poem i love you flow it's amazing i fel this way about some one to it's nice to ./ 5.5

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