This poem took my breath away, it was really amazing!!! You don't know me, but it's like I'm the girl you wrote about, but I'm not dead yet!!! Excellent writing, so sad...

Very sad and written very well! You did an amazing job on this poem. Love it! 5/5 Take Care~! Brooke

intresting poem....very good....*lisa* x)

OMG thats amazing u really feel 4 that girl xox

God i was an idiot with my last comment!
This poem is greta! it tell a story and keeps the reader interested! i liked the end how it all came together!
This was well written!Very sad but strong..keep it up xxx

God i was an idiot with my last comment!
This poem is greta! it tell a story and keeps the reader interested! i liked the end how it all came together!
This was well written!Very sad but strong..keep it up xxx