Yall this is my first poem and i am really proud of it and its so true about so many ppl on many diffrent levils i baised it on me and my bff sierra. SO plz dont make fun of it kk thanks- megan

WOW hun! I really liked this poem a lot! It is so sad and dark and it almost brought a tear to my eye...:*( !! Well great job and keep up the great work!
Love alwayz.....
Haily
XOXOXOXOXOXOX

theres nothing to make fun of it was an awesome poem. I loved it your an awsome writer. this poem gets 5/5
love always,
Elissa

Fun of it??!?! Are you kiddiing? This was amazing and really a great write!
Car

i love it , but i love all your stuff.. lol..ltr grl

This is a GREAT write....reminds me GREATLY of myself.....its so well written, and flows beautifuly.....
Love always
sammy

was this your first poem ever written? i like it! its very good...5/5

love always...HuGs

Good to have you and your talent back hun. missed you.
-A

GREAT POEM! WOW IT WAS AWSOME! keep up the good work!!
~*linds*~

so your seirras friend, thats cool, Names Lance, and I have had the chance to read alot of seirras poems. well anyways, I loved the poem, keep writting, if that was seriously your first poem, it was better then alot of first, room for improvment, but everyone has room for that, keep up the great writting. 5/5, no proplem

Dark and sad, but well written! Keep up the good work~