Hey, this is a great poem. I almost started to cry. Keep it up. Not heartbreaking, but writing, you're good at it.

u r an awesome writer, i enjoy reading ur work, keep em comin.

absolutly amazing!!!! great writing!!! i am soooooo impressed, im blown away!!! fab, but still so sad!!!! xxxxxxxx

dams this is great :D i love it

hope it didn't really happen to you... if it did... i'm very sorry for you

much love

Sad

great poem, i gave you 5/5. i guess the saying "Always tell someone you love them because hearts are often broken by words left unspoken" or the other one "you dont realize what you have until' its gone". good job anyways...is it true?
Ashley ~

oh my, this poem is so damn deep. i love it. so sad, i almost cried. bittersweet. nicly done

Wow! that was an amazing poem..made me cry! not only this poem but your others too! Great work..keep it up!

~Rach

omg that is so sad. i am about to cry. great job at writing it. it is very sad though.

wow, that was a good poem. harsh subject and painful. im sorry if that poem is based on true life. but i think expressing urself in such a way, like poems is really great. and ur really good.

oh wow. that was absolutely beautiful. even my heart less self felt.... wow.

wow great wrk

i have read your poems and you sound like a really sweet guy!one that is real hard to find!you are an awesome writer! you should look into getting a career in it!

OH MY GOD, that was so deep and emotional. So sad, but beautiful in a terrible awful way. Like Romeo and Juliet, i loved it...

I wish i could write like you, wow!!
That was so amazing, and yet so sad, keep it up.

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That poem gave me chills.. you are such a good writer. i admire you

Wow. i know your probly sick of my comments but wow i cant stop reading all your stuff. i find that they are all great and i was wondering if they come from your experiences or from your mind?.

The wonderful work of love...

Very beautiful, and touching loved it from the bottem of my heart. please id you get a chance can you check out my poems. thanks alot bye

Thats the sort of poem that makes you stop and think for a while as it's touching. It realy was a lovely poem, and after reading only so few of your writes i know you have an amazing talent.
never stop writing
x x x