Wow, i saw ur name on the forum asking why you weren't mentioned in any of the best poet things, so i thought i'd check out ur work. This was the first one that i went to and i have to say it left an impression on me, true or not, ur words were incredibly strong.

"I told her I loved her and I started to cry
She turned her head away, and silently died"

that stanza there really made the poem hit home, leaves the reader in suspense, because she turned her head away from you when you actually meant that you loved her. Keep up the good work!
- Jenna

Cool poem
please write more often
and make a book
and please please please read a few of my poems n temme how they are

Omg, that is so sad... that seriously brought me to tears... these lines especially...:

-She said “it’s a lie, you don’t love me”
“But this kitchen knife does and it can set me free”

-I told her I loved her and I started to cry
She turned her head away, and silently died

Omg... to sad for words... such a beautiful piece of work. 5/5

OMFG ON THE REAL I ADMIRE YOU I HAVE SOME LOVE N RESPECT FOR YOU AND I HOPE YOU KEEP WRITTIN POEMS CUZ YOUR ASS GOT TALENT

LOVE ALWAYS
JESSICA AKA
BIG BADASS NENA

That is really remarkable poem...its very sad almost bitter-sweet cause he really loves her. your a great writer and should keep up the good work. if u could comment on my work i'd really appreciate it
andi

Omg! so sad, but so good... i really liked it though!

Another fantasticly written piece. The story was well told, and the flow was superb. The rhymes were also well crafted, which helped make the emotions so strong. Another great piece.

Brad

Wow i have read this poem a couple times and every time there is something new i feel
it is intense and very meaningful
i loved it and you are truly a great writer

Woow baby did it just make me cry.... i hope my ex can realize if he loved me before its too late.... wow its such a great piece of writing good work

Omg...this was rlli sad nd the poem is written beautifully...well done

That's so sad..

--Sophia

Ur poem is really amazing
im just completely speechless right now..
.:taylor:.

A extremly touching poem i love your style i wish i was as good as you.

Sucha tradgically beautiful peice!!! well done!!!
5/5!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luv fallen

Wow.. where did this story come from?
its amazing.. to me there was alot of sensory
images in there believe it or not.. i really
pictured everything in my mind... wow!

Wow, that is such a great poem!! It is so sad, but true. It just goes to show how far some people will go for their true love. Your an amazing writer!!

Keep em' coming
Brandy

Its so awesome
man it makes me cry

Damn man... truly amazing... you got a grown man teary-eyed... shit, haha.

Excellent job! the ending was awesome. :)

Wow that was sooooooo... good i'm actually about to cry i'm serious!