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  • 18 years ago

    by AJ

    Wow, I can really relate. Hope you're ok. Good job. Keep it up and stay strong. 5/5

    ~no more

  • 18 years ago

    by W H O R E

    5/5. I can really relate to this one. Hold strong hon!
    -xx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    excellent job! really really good! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BRoKEN_

    ARSOMEISHNESS.....that was really great hope your doin ok and uhh keep it up!!! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Chad

    Very good.

  • 18 years ago

    by abcede

    awesome poem.. because most people can relate!! Props! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    This was an excellent poem. The only suggestion that I have is that you might change, "I'm not strong enough to deal I knew that all along..." to "I'm not strong enough to deal. I've known that all along." Just a suggestion though. Other than that, this was a very well written poem. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Maddie

    Very well written poem. With the first stanza i knew it would be another excellent poem. i see nothing wrong with it at all, great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy

    Very nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Content

    I can really relate to this - excellent poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    good poem. your a good writer