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  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I love the whole idea with the poem, excellent!!! I'm so sorry for your loss, but I'm sure he knew how much he meant to you, friends knows!! We all have things in life we regret doing or not doing, but unfortunaly we can't change the undone.... Great poem, amazing once again!!!

    *Love Sabrina*

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristen

    goofy at all! I loved it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    aww thats so sad! -"Note to my princess:
    If believing you was stupid,
    Then I'll wear that label with pride,
    Because when you said you loved me,
    My heart knew you hadn't lied ...

    But i have failed you, my darling,
    I guess there's not much more to say,
    With you the world was worth living in,
    Now it's pointless living another day ..."

    that part was very well writen and the part the touched my heart the most! so sad, coke back on tears sad.
    i'm so sorry for your lost, i know i already sad that, but i am sayin it again.

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ Hugs & forever love~ always here

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Wow... this was brilliantly written, seriously. This has to be one of your best poems.
    Love always,
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey thanks for your comment. Made me cry to know some nice people are out there. I love this poem. Written beautifully and I'd give you 100 if I could. Thanks again :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Kiersten Nicole

    aw. that is so sweet. so sad. its not weird at all, why would you say that? anyways.. great poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by MEGAN BUTTERLY

    we should all say things that we feel, we never know when we will ever get another chance to say them. even though it might be later that day. dont wait. ur so right. good poem. 5/5 xxoxoxoxoxox megan

  • 19 years ago

    by Wolfwood

    I love it, ive never seen a poem writen like this before. Could you rate and comment some of mine?

  • 19 years ago

    by cheyenne

    hey! i'm really sorry about your friend and that you didn't get a chance to say how you felt. the poem was very moving. me and my friend liz really enjoyed it yet it was so sad. keep riting
    LOL,
    chey-chey and liz

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    omg...that is so sad! i like the way you have written this...unique yet very good and i love it. amazing poem!! 5/5

    love always...*hugs*

  • 18 years ago

    by mandi

    awwww this brought tears to my eyes..... very well written.... we all should say things we mean.... because sooner or later it might me to late!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    That was soooo good and i'm sorry for your loss!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    thats very beautiful. im sure that your friend knew how much you cared and loved him.5/5
    ~Freak~

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Man, this is really sad...hope you're doing OK. By the way thanx 4 commenting on my poem. Yeah, I'm fine, nothing 2 worry about. =) TAKE CARE!!!