My love why did u leave me with so much pain

by kitten   May 5, 2005


I walk up and up never stopping it seams like iv been walking for hours i look at my watch 6:15, i look straight ahead, i look around me , no one there to talk me out of it, i keep on walking i felt a chill down my spine and turned fast and seen him, it was actually one week ago when u left this world, why did u leave me hear alone u told me we would be together for ever, didn't u realize how much u hurt my inside u told me u loved me and i told u i loved back well it was about 6:33pm when u left me a week ago and it's 6:31pm and i can live with this pain anymore, I'm sorry mom and dad i love ya and we will be together again soon.

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  • 19 years ago

    by kitten

    nope lol i'm kayla L

  • really well written poem, carefully thought out
    well done
    5

  • 19 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    how great! very sad...extremely well-written! great job!