It's Over?

by ºCrimsonTearsº   May 5, 2005


Look deep in my eyes and tell me it's over,
Thats the one thing I want to know,
If you can honestly walk away forever,
Then Babe I promise you I'll go.

We've been apart for a long time now,
But somehow I think you'll still come back,
Please don't leave me here all alone,
My broken heart, cold and black.

I know in your heart that I'm still there,
You're just to ashamed to admit it's true,
If I'm not then why did you call me,
Saying 'Babe, I still love you'?

Please don't ignore the scars on my wrist,
I know your soul feels my pain,
Because somewhere deep inside of you,
You know you're the one to blame.

Please, just honestly tell me that it's over,
Go ahead and break my heart into two,
But one thing you must know Babe,
My world won't be the same without you.

(I'm Finding It Really Hard To Write At The Moment, I Have all These Feelings Inside But Somehow I Just Can't Get Them Out. Votes And Comments Would Be Appreciated. Thanks.)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jana

    aww that is so cute.. i kinda know how your feeling with the wrists thing so please keep smiling! there are millions of people who love you!
    take care and keep writing!!
    love jana xxx
    p.s get better!

  • 18 years ago

    by MJ.

    omg thats so good!
    im really sorry for what youre going through.. i kinda know how it feels like... but always keep smilin
    youre a great writer
    bye
    mel

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Ah i hate that feeling however you still expressed your self well, don't give up one bad day has to be followed by a good one.... Stay strong

    Luv
    Tash
    xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Nicely written.. I loved it.. Keep your head up and take care (always))

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    i know the feeling of not being able to get something out that you so badly want to say and i think that you did an excellent job..it's structured but still somewhat a collection of the million thoughts and feelings running through your head..great job