good writing!! lots of feeling!!! really true! take care xxxx

Great write hun, I can really relate. ltp x

this is an awsome poem! I like the way you wrote it the words flowed together adn the rhyme is not forced in it. Great job, keep up the good work! maybe you should tell him how you feel or at least tell him who you are who knows things might work out! Always believe in love and trust in God!!!
-Britt

thank you to all that have commented .. it has helped and means a lot to me :)

good job.....keep it goin

aww thats a cute poem! i like it.

awe seems as though ur n love, nice 1!!

This was great... and right now I am in the same perdicament...

Not too bad of a poem...flowed fairly well.

That was really good! i can totally relate!! 5/5 keep writing!

O i like dat poem I feel da same way bout someone right now too!keep it up you work is pimp

Really good poem the style was effective. i hope he got the pic in the end