Comments : Will you?

  • 16 years ago

    by gemma

    good writing!! lots of feeling!!! really true! take care xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Great write hun, I can really relate. ltp x

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney

    this is an awsome poem! I like the way you wrote it the words flowed together adn the rhyme is not forced in it. Great job, keep up the good work! maybe you should tell him how you feel or at least tell him who you are who knows things might work out! Always believe in love and trust in God!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia

    thank you to all that have commented .. it has helped and means a lot to me :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Natasha

    good job.....keep it goin

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrea

    aww thats a cute poem! i like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Seductive

    awe seems as though ur n love, nice 1!!

  • 16 years ago

    by smammie

    This was great... and right now I am in the same perdicament...

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    Not too bad of a poem...flowed fairly well.

  • 16 years ago

    by jamie

    That was really good! i can totally relate!! 5/5 keep writing!

  • 15 years ago

    by []D.[].[]V[].[]D MiSs

    O i like dat poem I feel da same way bout someone right now too!keep it up you work is pimp

  • 14 years ago

    by Dr of Bishonomics

    Really good poem the style was effective. i hope he got the pic in the end