This is a beautiful poem, it's very sad.but i really enjoyed it

Now that was poetry from the soul. An awesome write, powerful, sad, and dark. The emtions were dripping from every word, the word choice, was perfectly flaw less, and the flow was amazing. I like how at the end, she regreted committing sucide. the message was clear, and hopefully it will make somebody think, before they do it. An excellently written peice you deserve no less than 5/5. Please don't stop writting, my soul would suffer a tragic loss if I could not read your written words.

My god that was a good poem. the flow was slightly off in some sentences but that hardly mattered.i love how you had the girl see all the pain she caused by killing herself.
5/5
Love is the law
Love under will
Rocky

Your writting is full of emotion i love it! keep it up! you very good!

Wow... this is really good. it's very strong, very emotional. it was a nice description of the relationship between life and death. great job 5/5

Certainly one of the best of yours that I have read so far... Amazing!!!!