Wow, really depressing yet fantastic poem, well done and sorry this happened to you, keep it up and take care, please look at my two newest thanks

Wow, this is really good powerful stuff. keep up the good work

Not what I was expecting...shows your pain... I like the ending, moving on with your life is important. Saying good-bye isn't easy though. Nicely done.

xxx

Omg thats so sad im sorry

Omg thats so sad im sorry

So sweet! i loved it. it flowed so well, and the rhymes seemed unforced. well done

Ruby

Wow great poem.....Its Very sad!!!:( Im so sorry about you loss. It's very written very well. You did a wonderful job.

So sad! It's one of the best poems I ever read..
I'm so sorry if it really happened to you
5/5

Soooo beautiful and emotional poem.
Although it's so sad, sorry for that..
Good luck dear !

xxx

I really liked it. Keep it up. *5/5*

Omg, From the title I was thinking another lost love blah blah, But this was excellent!! So diffrent and sad =[

Well done it was beautiful.x

Omg... That's really all i can say. I'm practically crying...

Woah! so sad, was this a true story or just a product of ur imagination? btw, great!