wow...that's some pretty incredible work...I'm sort of confused by the ending, but very well done here. The whole concept around the "second grade letter" - Love it.

xxx

that was really good! great, even! i loved it, nice story! i guess all your hard work paid off! very well written! keep it up! take care. :)

aww.. that was so sad n sweet.. i loved ur rhyme.. it flowed very well.. i lyk how u showed wat was in the letter in the last stanza..
in one of the stanzas" was driving both of them mad".. i think it shud be changed to "was driving them both mad" for better flow in the stanza.. but of curse its all up to u.. ur piece was reli gr8.. i enjoyed reading it
keep writing
take care

B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L poem this one rocked...........i loved it. Really made me think that i shud tell this guy that i love him..........so thank u.
luv jess xoxoxoxox

Awesome !! im speechless.. its the old story retold but u did a good job
5/5
love
amy

This one really touched me. My love used to quote the Check Yes or No song by George Straight, so now my tears flow again.