pretty good..it was short and simple, but length doesn't matter much its whats happening in the poem and you did a great job of showing that

Unloved ♥

thank you very much i appreciate it!!

you list the effects very well but the cause for this sudden emotion is still real hazy not even a reason why. It was good but I seen you do better...

the reason i didn t put WHY is bc i dont know. i wrote it out of my head because i was paranoid. i appreciate the critizism. i will take that in2 consideration n thx 4 the comments!!!

Great poem! 5.0

thx!!!

Good poem hun! So dark and sad!
Love alwayz....
Haily

thanx!!!

hmmm.. short and meaningful, i liked it because you described the emotion very well.
unique write:)

i think the ending could have been a bit better. you should have added a bit more, or pulled it all together a bit more. but overall its rather well.
~Freak~

wow that was so strikin 4 such a short poem, it reli blew me away. 5/5 well dun i reli liked it xxx

thanks and i will work on the ending...

Hey Paulette, great poem! Well done x

thank you everyone!!!

Nice detail its a good poem

Very good short poem! To be paranoid is a terrible feeling! Hope you are okay! Take Care! Brooke~

I feel that way all the time 5/5

im glad that people can relate!