Look At Me

by Emma Carnage   May 6, 2005


Look at me
And you will see
An empty hole
A broken soul
Lost control
An unmet goal

Look at me
And you will agree
That there is no hope
I just can't cope
I'm falling down the slope
I'm at the end of my rope

Look at me
And you will flee
From this horrid sight
Of someone with no light
Who lives in the night
And just can't do right

Look at me
And you will see
A broken soul
And you will agree
That there is no hope
And you will flee
From this horrid sight
Look at me
And you will see
Agree
Flee

*this was a bit different type of poem for me. i don't really know if it has a certain name for this type. i just kinda thought it up on the spot. just experimenting with stuff.*

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  • 18 years ago

    by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist

    wow this was way different from something id rite ... it makes a lot of sense tho i enjoyed reading it thanks for sharring.

  • 18 years ago

    by eternal rest

    ohhh... wow, i love it emma! sad, but its wonderfully written... i absolutely love it.... i think i might print it out... hmm...

    .:kelly:.

  • 18 years ago

    by Vicious Tragedy â„¢

    I like that style of writing... I can't rhyme worth a darn!

  • 18 years ago

    by LoÑ£ly♥P!rÄτΣ

    Wow, that was cool! 5/5!
    Katie

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma Carnage

    hey, thanx everyone. i'll be sure to check out all of your work when i have the chance! thanx again!

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