by alinaXonly1
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Great!!! |
by yarelli12
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GREAT POEM!! This reminds me so much of me and my boyfriend. That's how i felt every night before I took the risk and confessed how I felt. We're together and happier than ever.... |
by NiCoLe
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AMAZING WORDS |
by ganjaru
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Amazing! |
by los
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Good work...check my out.. |
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It's very true and it's happening with me right now |
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This...is...amazing! I just told one of my best friends that i'm in love with him. I think it'll pay off |
by Brittany C
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Good poem. It flowed ok but i think that it would flow even better if you were to break it up some. Other then that it was great. |
by Maggie
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I love it!! Definitely reminds me of someone in my life. Very well written :) |
by Amreen
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Ah so beautiful....just the best...! |
by Burning Angel
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This is sooo godo. I love it!!!! |
by Pamela G
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Very well written, I like the ending part; |
by catherin
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Awesome awesome just awesome..loved it .. |
by Dark Shadows
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You wrote it way back in 2003.Hope you told that person how you felt and all is well. |
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Awsoomee.... |
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Awsoomee.... |
by Pete Daniels
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What a beautiful poem, such heartbreaking words of pure love, i love this poem. |
by Dark Shadows
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Love suppressed is bound to explode someday and lives involved are messed up.Let the love flow.Love is divine life energy,when you lock it inside it dies of suffocation.Unrequited love is a stab in the heart, but the only way we can receive the love we seek - by expressing our desires to the person we love.You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back. |
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What a way with words I like it a lote. |
by firexflys
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I think maybe this is a great way of telling him how you feel... i also remember that when i told my best friend that i like him more then just friends we dated for almost 5 years. it ended and i did lose him as a friend but wow what a great first love.... anyway i think this is beautiful, full of feeling love the flow. |