awww that was cute keep writing!

Another great poem! 5.0 ♥

The second to the last paragragh could need rewording but other then that it was a nice read...

aww really good..keep it up!

much love
shannon

I loved it!!

very sweet poem! beautifully written piece! :)

Good use of repition here another emotion feeled piece of work.

Keep Writing
Nici

thats realy sweet again 5/5!!

Awesome poem here. this is exactly what I wanna say to someone(jermey). but yea. anyways 5/5