Comments : Beautiful...

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Good poem... Well done.. :) I've been missing your poems, I hope evrything can get better for you and that you can find happiness

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Oh hun, this is so sad. its not rubbish. so beautifully expressed. what a beautiful poem! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    I hope everything is okay for you girl <3 This was very touching; nicely written: Remember to be strong.

    Luffvoo forever,
    ||Kalah.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey got another new poem. Don't like it though :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    yes i do vote on ur poems. Always a 5! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    Followed through very well. I gave it a 5! Well written! Read some of mine if you find time.

  • 19 years ago

    by *liZ*

    aww im so sorry i hope things start looking up for oyu... great job 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    This was also very good. Keep it up!!

  • 19 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    this poem is, in itself "beautiful"

    good job! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    I like how you wrote this one. Great job. >3jess

  • 19 years ago

    by W H O R E

    Very well written. Another 5/5. Hold strong huni.

    -xx-

  • 19 years ago

    by rachel

    u may nt think this is 1 of ur best bt i reli liked it, it was reli beautiful and sad xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    The abab rhyme scheme did not work well here, the poem felt coppy and forced, work on the flow of the poem and it will improve. I also feel that this poem was cliche, but to each his own. Keep writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    great.... 5 stars for this one... keep it up..!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Yeh I see what you mean! Ignore it - the poem is fine, written about your feelings and thats ok. Keep smiling hun! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    You said this is not one of your best, but I think you have a wonderful way of conveying your sadness in words. A lot of these hit home for me. You have earned a spot in my favorites list.

  • 19 years ago

    by ** JeNa **

    great job, i hope to read more of ur work soon!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla

    I just wanted to let you know I added you to my favorites

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Beautifully written! Not your best? well I happen to really like it. I think you dad an amazing job! Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    very nice man i like it