by Madi May 11, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
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The night was black and the moon was full everybody was quiet but nobody knew that the end was coming very very soon |
by Kurt
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It is confusing. Its also jumpy and dodges around the subject. Be a little more specific and split the lines up and make it a little longer. It has a potential to be great if you work on it and get progressively better. |
by redxiii
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Hey i got a street fight sat that i will be in so i wanted to talk to u b4 it well i guess thats cool ttul bye |