wow..that was really great! very sad! 5/5 keep it uP~

Hey Manda likes this poem! It is such a great poem filled with sadness but it is from your heart - perfect! :)

such an awesome write!! keep up the good work!!! 5/5! thanks for the comments!
Hayley-Ree xxx

I Loved The Powerful Display Of Emotion In This Poem, Beautiful Write 5/5! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Great poem! 5.0 Mayb u cud check out my poemz one day! Thanx ♥

Wow, you hit home on that one, this sounds like the exact thing my ex said to me. It brought a tear to my eye. I really enjoyed this poem, but I didn't like the last line, Rhyming "free" and "me" in a poem that doesn't have a consastant rhyme scheme doesn't work out in this poem. However, you still did a really nice job on this, keep it up!

I liked this one alot too. You have a very captivating and detailed way of writing. very enjoyable

Very deep poem! You show great detail and emotions in your work that always makes for a good read! ~Brooke~