Cut me open..

by Line   May 11, 2005


I can feel the blood down my arm.
The knife so fine is laying beside me, it makes me harm.
How do you ever feel good again?
Right now, theres nothing good in the future, not even my friend.
I wonder if it ever goes away? If anything good is near.
it is my biggest fear.
Am i always going to cut and be depressed?
Or is it the way that I am dressed?
In blood and sorrow.
It\'s everybody\'s horror.
That I am going to cut till I die.
But, wait a minute, it\'s all just a lie.
No one really cares, they hate me!
So, just let me be ...

leave me alone..

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  • 18 years ago

    by kRyStA_+

    Heya. I like your poem very much so!! Keep it up and keep writing. I believe that you could write better poems, no doubt, but this one is very good. As a self injurer, i know where you are coming from.. people do care babe. keep ur head up. PLease comment on my poems! And never give up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    I didn't like it so much. No offense, but the ending just totally threw it off. At the start it was good and it got a little better in the middle cause everything was ryhming and coming together, but then the end with the whole "No one cares...Let me be...Leave me alone..." Made the poem not good. If you're going to ryhme you can't ryhme through the whole poem and then not at the end or vise-versa and what not, you have to make it all come together... Other than that, it was all right. Not a favorite.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tasha

    Okay, you commented on my poem. Wow, this poem moved me. I am a self injurer, I probably always will be but this changed my view. People DO care about you. I DO! I don't know you but I care! Please, an innocent life shouldn't be taken..

  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    hiya. your poem is very good and very strong. i just want to let you no that some people care. i dont no you, and already i care. please email me or put a comment on one of my poems cos i want to help and maybe talk things through:s. its up2 you, but im hear for you. love Anna xxxx

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