Looking for love

by angela   May 12, 2005


There was this girl who fell in love with this guy. They got along great it was just a matter of time.

The years went by and all things were good. Till this new guy showed up, right out of the blue.

This new guy was different and very nice, he seem to be perfect but was it a lie?

She ended her first love and got with the new. They had a great time and the months grew.

She felt something wrong as she did not feel love. So she told him one night, and they had broken up.

She went to her ex, hoping things would be good. Turns out they were bad and would never be good.

She had lost 2 friends who were always there. All she had left was her reasons to care.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    your writing is sooo deep! i like it a lot!

    much love,
    Britney

  • 18 years ago

    by FaLlEnDreAm

    Tis Poem Is NicE!! HeehEe I sugest Tat u should write more bout errr... Anithing tat u feel.. if ur sad, write bout sad stuff... if ur happi write bout happi... follow ur emotion... ;) niwae, jux finish writting a poem.. come and read it.. comment pls..;D

  • 18 years ago

    by gavpt

    Hi, I'm Gavin from the UK. I really liked your poems, can relate to them. Do you have any other poems?
    Peace and love