You made me want to live

by LostHopesCrimsonTears   May 12, 2005


A love i don't deserve
in a life i don't deserve to live
to repay you for this happiness
theres nothing i can give

cause there nothing in this universe
that could show how greatfull i am
i could spend forever trying
but i don't think that i can

i don't know what to believe anymore
since Ive met you Ive been so confused
but however we where brought together
i know that i cant loose you

I'm different when i am with you
drive me crazy is what you do
if you could only see the real me
then you'd know just how much i love you

but there is one thing that i can do
to show you how much i care
to show you how much you mean to me
i can promise to always be there

a love i don't deserve
in a life i don't deserve to live
to repay you for this happiness
Ive decided that I'm going to live

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

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  • 18 years ago

    by --SlIpPin_AwAy--

    Thats really good! Actually, its great!You have a lot of talent! I gave you a 5/5!!
    xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Beautifully written! I loved it! You did an amazing job! Keep it up! I have to give you a 5/5 for this one! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Ria

    I always wanted to do this!Begin and end with the same verse,and change the final line!!!Bah you did that before me:P It was very nice, emotional and direct!Great!:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    Keep up the work

  • 18 years ago

    by steve

    Im glad you found the will to live..whoever it is halping you hold on should feel proud...good poem