omg excellent poem! i love it. it's so sad. wonderful write. i'm so sorry it it's true, i can't even imgine how much that would hurt to go through and see happen. wonderful poem and great ending.

~PLP~ lil slam~ take care~

Sad but beautiful write. I know these feelings to well. Touching and heartfelt. hugs, love, *Ann*

So very touching and sad, but beautifully written. I understand the feelings only to well. Great write.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

This was excellent my sister just died soo i know how you fell

this was a great but sad poem. keep up the good work. if this is true don't worry b/c though you can't see them they are still in your heart. remember always keep your head up and stay strong

Wow that was deep..and really good...great poem!!

VERY good, is this true???

Wow good poem. it is very sad, but that shows how well it is written. I hope it isn't a true story, if it is stay strong...and keep them in your heart.

Keep writing!!

OMG! Thats reallly good!! and soo sad!! I hope that, that didnt really happen! 5/5 *KISSES*~Corrie

I love this poem alot!! I mean i have some sad poems but this is the best poem ever!! Im soo sorry that this is true, but its beautifully written!!! 100.5!!

WOW! THAT WAS A REALLY GOOD POEM AND A VERY SAD POEM WELL TAKE CARE AND KEEP UP WITH THE GOOD POEM!!!!11

I love this poem. It is an excellent and beautiful piece. Very sad and haunting.

This was so sad. Very moving and heartfelt. I loved it. Really good job! 5/5

that is really cute...I'm sorry if somethin like that happened to u that would suck...I kno i wouldnt be able to handle it I'd break down if I lost my best friend died especially now cuz she's pregnant n i'm more anxious for her to have her baby then she is i think. Well your poem was really cute

That is so good!

I know how you were feeling when you wrote this poem. It is awesome and I feel that you truly express how you were feeling. i am so sorry and I hope you get far in writing. You deserve the best. (I am a counselor of you cannot tell)

Love it I have similar feelings with one of my best friends who is sick

Great poem!

Wow i think this is amazing !! brought tears to my eyes... just wiped them away...
i can picture myself on the same bed & i think this friend of mine will be feeling this way...
u must read "murder or suicide" to know how i feel now..it'll be nice if u leave a word & say how u felt bout the poem..
else just read it should be fine
ur poem is one of the best i've read
i wish i could give u 10/10
but now guess 5/5 is all i can do : (

Excellent and heartwrenching all at once, a dangerous but successful combination