Comments : Someone else

  • 15 years ago

    by krystal

    thats awesome!!! 5/5 it reminds me of my ex actally it sounds just like it like your living my life lol keep up the great work

  • 15 years ago

    by Christa

    wow, I really enjoyed your poem! It helps to know other people feel the same way I do. Keep you your amazing work.

  • 15 years ago

    by xUnbreakablex

    that was gr8! the rhyming was really gud 5/5 keep it up x x x

  • 15 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    I know how that feels...well the guy I broke up with moved on sooooo fast. i knew he was over me...but I couldn't get over him...then i talked to him and he told me if he had the chance he'd take me back without a second thought. That's why you should tell him how you feel...cuz maybe he hasn't gotten over you yet

  • 15 years ago

    by Nat the dreamer

    This poem is excellent. I've totally been there, well AM there. It flows really well, and I love the rhyme.

  • 15 years ago

    by Talya

    God do I know how you feel, it's hard isn't it? I wish you the best of luck, and you have ,my support!

  • 15 years ago

    by MissSideways

    thanx so much guys! yeh it really hurts coz my boyfriend and i only just broke up like a few weeks ago. it just breaks my heart to think that i was so foolish to believe it'd be forever. im only 16, how dum could i get! oh well, sometimes u just gotta learn. god bless u all, thanx for ur support :)
    luv dani
    xoxo

  • 15 years ago

    by MissSideways

    hehe i luv u guys :)

  • 15 years ago

    by hassan

    realllllllly nice poem 5/5! keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by hassan

    really good poem, 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Amber

    I really like this poem and I can seriously relate to it! This is exactly how I felt when I saw my ex with another girl!

  • 15 years ago

    by MissSideways

    thankyou so much everyone!! its awesome to hear ur comments and really encouraging. i think this is definately something that both sexes commonly come across during their life, especially when ur a teenager, ouch huh :( ur support is so good, thanx for cheering me up and helping me stay strong. lots of love,
    dani xoxo
    God bless

  • 15 years ago

    by ...em...

    realli good. i can realate. keep up tha good writin. xox

  • 15 years ago

    by Seductive

    ur flow is tight!! 5/5, i really liked this 1 .

  • 15 years ago

    by Nikki

    i LOVE that peom!!! the first part was jsut so much like what happened...omg thats like exactly what i wanted to say!! thats a GREAT poem!!
    ~*~ Nikki2~*~

  • 15 years ago

    by EEG

    that was really...REALLY good!!

  • 15 years ago

    by ~*Nicki*~

    This is a really good poem. I am going through this right now. It so hurts. you should read some of my poems sometime. DOnt forget to vote and comment

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittney

    This is really good! keep up the good work.
    Always believe in love and trust in God!!
    -Britt

  • aw I'm in love with your poem.:) i really wish i could write that good! lol, on a scale of one to 5...im giving ti a 6!:D you're making me feel like everythings happening all over again, may sound bad but actually its good:) cause now im stronger and it helps me get over the loss of "him" more:) so thankyou:) your writing is very insparational:)

  • 15 years ago

    by MissSideways

    thankyou so much everyone :) u guys ROCK!! always stay strong, faithful and passionate. life's beautiful if u just look at things above ground level ;) if that makes sense, lol. lots of love and appreciation for your support and encouraging comments,
    dani xoxo MWAH
    God bless