thats awesome!!! 5/5 it reminds me of my ex actally it sounds just like it like your living my life lol keep up the great work

wow, I really enjoyed your poem! It helps to know other people feel the same way I do. Keep you your amazing work.

that was gr8! the rhyming was really gud 5/5 keep it up x x x

I know how that feels...well the guy I broke up with moved on sooooo fast. i knew he was over me...but I couldn't get over him...then i talked to him and he told me if he had the chance he'd take me back without a second thought. That's why you should tell him how you feel...cuz maybe he hasn't gotten over you yet

This poem is excellent. I've totally been there, well AM there. It flows really well, and I love the rhyme.

God do I know how you feel, it's hard isn't it? I wish you the best of luck, and you have ,my support!

thanx so much guys! yeh it really hurts coz my boyfriend and i only just broke up like a few weeks ago. it just breaks my heart to think that i was so foolish to believe it'd be forever. im only 16, how dum could i get! oh well, sometimes u just gotta learn. god bless u all, thanx for ur support :)
luv dani
xoxo

hehe i luv u guys :)

realllllllly nice poem 5/5! keep it up

really good poem, 5/5

I really like this poem and I can seriously relate to it! This is exactly how I felt when I saw my ex with another girl!

thankyou so much everyone!! its awesome to hear ur comments and really encouraging. i think this is definately something that both sexes commonly come across during their life, especially when ur a teenager, ouch huh :( ur support is so good, thanx for cheering me up and helping me stay strong. lots of love,
dani xoxo
God bless

realli good. i can realate. keep up tha good writin. xox

ur flow is tight!! 5/5, i really liked this 1 .

i LOVE that peom!!! the first part was jsut so much like what happened...omg thats like exactly what i wanted to say!! thats a GREAT poem!!
~*~ Nikki2~*~

that was really...REALLY good!!

This is a really good poem. I am going through this right now. It so hurts. you should read some of my poems sometime. DOnt forget to vote and comment

This is really good! keep up the good work.
Always believe in love and trust in God!!
-Britt

aw I'm in love with your poem.:) i really wish i could write that good! lol, on a scale of one to 5...im giving ti a 6!:D you're making me feel like everythings happening all over again, may sound bad but actually its good:) cause now im stronger and it helps me get over the loss of "him" more:) so thankyou:) your writing is very insparational:)

thankyou so much everyone :) u guys ROCK!! always stay strong, faithful and passionate. life's beautiful if u just look at things above ground level ;) if that makes sense, lol. lots of love and appreciation for your support and encouraging comments,
dani xoxo MWAH
God bless