Great poem Great work! :)
Keep it up

aShLeY...

this poems is BEAUTIFUl !!!

awwww *wipes tear* that is amazing!! i love it .. you are very talented :P !!! take a moment to read my stuff if you can!

this is one of the best poems i have heard and it also inspired me to tell the one i love that i want him and he shopuld be with me not the other girl!! thank you so much

i feel u on this one! rock on =

i feel u on this one! rock on =

upseting

your poem was so beautiful. i can relate to that poem very strongly. It is like my relationship with my ex Caleb who i want back but he has someone new

thanx everyone:) its lovely to hear ur comments, keep on keeping on. peace
luv dani
xoxo

Brillient dani, absolutly brillient. your a very powerful and passionate writer and i look forwad to reading more of your stuff. please give us of my unvoted poems a read and let me know what you think, thanks

Great poem. This is exactly how I feel when I see my ex with his new girl. It hurts knowing that I was the one who ended things and if it weren't for me we would still be together.

Great poem!!!!!!!!

Wow, thats soo wierd! i am goin through this right now! we share the same feelings...lol
luv em

Once again... i loved it

you are amazing

Wow, your poems are really really good..!! i dont have much posted here because everything i have is written on paper and i hate to type off of paper, but you should comment me sometime... i really love this poem

Wow, This Poem is fantastic, i loved it, it reminds me of one of my exes, he left me for my friend...how gai is that? and now, he is claimin that he still likes me.. Hmm.. i didnt no what to do about it,coz he is with his gf still, and ur poem has helpedme think about what im gonna do. Thanks babe, Keep up the good work. Mwah!

Wow this is really good! i love this poem!

Beautiful, i really liked it

Yey that as great!!! u made tearz come out my eyes!!! im so going through that right now right now!!!! it hurts to read it because its so true!!!! i wish he would take me back!!!! but love doesnt alwayz last forever.... but its probably not even love.... i am only 17

Aww.. really beautiful poem! i love ur poems!
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