''the pain that people have caused you doesn't affect you like it hurts me'' means that even though your hurting inside it doesn't bother you.

i like this poem, alot of thought went into it, you're a good writer, you have lots of soul in what you write, 5/5
love treak

That is an amazing poem! well done

you have extra ordinary talent, hats off to you sir!

not bad at all

this is great. keep up the good work.

i love it. its really sweet. xxx

nice little poem! i like the ending, good job! keep it up!

I love this one...lovely flow and very sad... it reminded me of an awesome book called Tithe...you should check it out if you like faeries :)

xxxx

I really dont like how you compared them to teeth...it just didnt sound rihgt....other then that it was pretty good..though there wasnt n/ething special about it...4/5