Oh another impressing poem.

I'm out of words..

You are heading right into my fav list..no doubt!

Such a great story...

I wanna be that good=(

Keep writing...please?

What can I say I really liked it, especially the mix of fantasy.

Wow an amazing job on this poem. Unique and very well done! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~

It has been a true pleasure to read your work, I thank you.

I enjoyed the message of this poem, yet in form, this poem was somewhat confusing. The rhyming scheme is inconstant and hard to follow. You did a great job portraying your imagery, though....I could practically see everything you wrote about.

Some people are born with words, and their hearts are dressed in such elegance you've shown here.
Your imagination is swift and relentless, effective in sweepong dull under the carpet *smiles*.

This was a fine poem!

Wow! this left me speechless. This poem is very enchanting. I love the rhyme scheme and the message behind it! Great job. 5/5

You are really good at writting keep it up:)

I am speechless by the brilliance of that poem, it was just.. amazing, everything about it, I can hardly find words to say how much I loved it, thank you for sharing that poem with everyone wow... wow.. keep it up

Again full of descriptive lines and phrases which all work together well.

Keep Writing
Nici

It could have used just a little bit more flow, but I liked the ending, even though I found it a little bit difficult to understand the whole picture...but as I have said before, thats just style.

Good Writing!
beth

This was good, b/c it was quite deep. though the flow was kinda off and didnt really match the whole way through ( sorry im big on flow lol) otherwise great poem....and thanks for the critique

"your words take hold when reading"
this poem is as deep as the ocean and as strong as the tide. a very well written piece, it captivates the reader, inspiring.