Good poem...the theme was great<3
Keep writing hun!

*Tori*

I liked this one a lot. The flow was nice and so were the rhymes. Very sad story, but I felt your emotions. Keep it up. 5/5.

OMG! Katie, i hope these poems are not about you! Great writing though. Email me if you need someone to talk to. michaelharpe@hotmail.com -Mike

The repitition works better in this poem than in the first piece I read. I think that is mainly because only one line is repeated compared to half the stanza. This means that the message seemed to come across clearer.

Stay Inspired
Nici

Very well done yet so sad. I just wrote a poem about my diary. Keep writing! Take Care! Brooke~

Aww, that's soooo sad! To me, the fourth stanza was the best. 5/5
~Emmy

good job! keep it up!

Nicely done! i loved this and you kept it interesting!! great job and keep it up!! i like your idea of it too!

wow, this is definately my favorite so far! it flows very well and i love your style! the repeats are your thing!! keep it up! 5/5!
love always,
Abcede >,<

great poem! 5

the repetition again is a tool you use really well.
your work leaves a very strong emotion, and i beleive that you are a very talented writer
keep it up

It's aasd . but I liked it .. flowed well . I liked it .. its one of the best I have read so far !
April` 5/5

It's sad . but I liked it .. flowed well . I liked it .. its one of the best I have read so far !
April` 5/5

WOW! What a powerful poem. I am so against self harm but this poem just shouts out at me...I feel like in a way you are portraying the journal as a call for help…as the journal is the only one that knows of her terrible plight. Normally I would say the repetition of one line can be overwhelming but you definitely make it work in this piece. I love it...excellent write.

This was awesome
:o)
Loved it