Aww, such a sad, but beautifully penned poem!.... I wish your father and you well. Stay strong! 5/5

Love Always,
Heather Craig

This poem is really sad. I hope that everything with your dad really is ok.
Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

That is so sad! It made me cry! He'll be in my prayers! 5.0

xoxo

i loved that poem hun, i hope your dads ok, he's a great guy. see you at school hun
love hannah

I REALLY LIKED THAT POEM AND IT REMINDS ME OF MY DAD!

good job!keep up the good work!I know it is really hard to write poems.I tried before but mine never turn out any good.
Alicia

Wow that is really deep i like this it is amazing i like the last part :
I hope youre ok
And i know i dont say this a lot
But i love you
With all that i've got.
I like that line because i once said that to my dad so i know how you feel. great poem 5/5