Mom and dad

by Bonnie Fowler   May 15, 2005


Mom and dad i guess i lied
i just sat and stared at the blade
but believe me mom & dad i tried
but life just started to fade away
I couldn't stand life
I just let it all go
through all my pain and strife
I thought that you should know
I loved him with everything
everything that I had to give
without him mom and dad
I just couldn't live
I couldn't go on
without him by my side
everytime they played our song
I would just break down and cry
you must understand
the pain that i went through
and at least that you know
that our love was true.....

***Please comment and vote. I wrote this at 3:45 a.m. this morning and it is seeming like its gonna turn into a true thing...look out for part #2.........

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    hey great poem i can relate to a certain degree. well done for managing to express ur emotions, i tend to write nearly all of my poems in the early hours of the morning as i can't sleep because of nightmares. please read and comment on some of my poems if u have a chance. thanks and well done, excellent 5/5 keep writin

  • 18 years ago

    by jescelle

    very good sweetheart..... i know how you feel......trust me, its gonna ba hard for along time, but the man of your dreams will come someday and sweep u off your feet......
    jescelle

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