BlAcK OuT

by SEAN   May 16, 2005


I am defeated
the secret has leaked
the seldom spoke shadows are weaklings
and so is the clarity i seek

the visions have become deceitful
and my mind in turn has wilted
theres only threat in crying discreetly
and in turn my future is filtered

i attempted to retaliate
with the pain i helped breed
but you keep close to the ones you intoxicate
and kept me in the loop of distaste

i am not happy
your still here
crawling slowly
so insincere

i hate you
suicidal intent
i hate you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Schmeg

    Thanx fer the comment!!! and I like this poem! TIS BEAUTIFUL DAHL!

  • 18 years ago

    by Julianne

    I like how honest and straightfoward you are with your writing. Your poems are very easy to read yet they still sends very powerful messages. Thanks for reading my poetry, too. I appreciate the comments!
    ~Julianne

  • 18 years ago

    by herewithme

    Thats so powerful =/

    really well written :) i love it a bunch of lillies

    thanks for the comment on my poem =)
    keep up the great work
    catcha