great poem, keep it up

nice flow passionatly expressed desire great poem 5

That poem cuts it with me. Nice one - brilliant infact!

Very passionate poem..I loved it. I must say I enjoyed the ending the most, it was very well written! Keep writing,
Satuxxa

Thank you all, yes I am a beginner, I'm just glad that something I wrote can touch you all. ^_^

Your poems are so beautiful...Really glad you joined the site. You are on my favorites already. :o)

Absolutely fantastic .. You are very talented keep up the good work chum!! .. and maybe you could read mine :P

You are such a great poet....eek
Katie
oh yeah 5

Very creative. I truly loved this piece. Though I'm confused as to why you used green and black when describing love...however, I understand love is not always pink and red...lol I loved the creativity and your wording is divine...truly an excellent write!! :)

I'm not describing "love" its more about the different sides to my personality, and to give the person i love insight to what makes me tick

I think this one is probably your best poem i have read so far; very sweet and original idea. loved it. 5/5