great job, your really good. keep writing!

another excellent poem 5

this is really REALLY good. I loved every line.
5/5!
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speechless...

simply beautiful and amazing, i wish i could give you some constructive critisism, but i love your writing. ther
i hope you dont get sick of my comments.:)

p.s i especially loved the last two stanzas

i loved it. excellent job

a gift of love...a broken dove...

thats is a beautiful sentence there. this poem sent shivers down my back it was so unique..almost enchanting, i have to say. Marvelous you showed overwhelming feelings keep up the writing! thx for comments on my poems!:) ttyl
<3 weeping wolf

another beautifullly written poem. I love how ur poems seem to flow..even tho they have very little rhyme. its great!

my naked thoughts of my bleeding soul
outstretched to God, asking once more to be whole
the torment of mind, as the secrets unwind
i still need to be with you

that is my favorite line! i love ur work, ur such a great poet. dont stop writing, i am off to read more!

Wow awesome job! very unique poem and i absolutely loved it! I really enjoyed the begining of the poem though it really got me interested, anyways great job! keep up the great work!

wow. *blown away* You have really deep emotions and i can feel you trying to express it in your poems.. good job :D

sooo good once again..you certainly have a talent here.. i hope you do write more..5/5

take care
much love
shannon