Another great poem. It was so full of emotion. I love the last verse of the poem. 5/5 Keep writing!

-Ice

Brilliant...some pretty vivid description...

"Shattering all your dreams of me,
But my heart is still left broken."

Beautiful!

xxx

I love all of your poems.There full of emotioan and meaning.Keep writin 5/5

*~JAMIE~*

aww another sad poem...thats okay..lol...my poems are sad too...anwyay...i truely love the last line...it is soo very true...gosh love kills... anyways nice job once again 5/5 luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Another awesome piece - the ending really rounded it off nicely, just the implication that you are far more worse off than she is. Really nice work again, :)

Amazing! alot of emotion. 5/5
take care
Megan

This is a beautiful poem, amazingly written and you can really feel the emotion when reading it, well done!

WOOW,,,definately one of the best poems o have ever read,,nice structure nice flow,,,,,u put it real well,,,good job,,,,

Bite your tongue and talk to me.
So when you speak, you feel the pain.
Every drop of blood spilled by you,
Would be every beat of my heart.
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Loved that stanza. This poem was so good. I loved it from start to finish. && Sorry if my comments are taking ages. I'm just doing alot. Buuut, This wa awesome, Worth more then a 5. But I can only give it a 5 tehe. 5/5

`taleee xx

This one doesnt flow as well but is still amazing...if true...im sry
Jennifer