Excellent poem, I have some like this too and can relate. You have talent! I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

Wow if that's true I really feel for you! It was so sad it brought a tear to my eye! Very well expressed and full of heartbreak. You did an amazing job on this poem! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~

so beautiful baby. i hope you find her one day. great poem, one of your best. *mua*
~Freak~

Wow...amazing choice of words...the rhyming was excellent...beautiful heart touching poem...keep up the good work...take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>

that is so sad....i sat here reading it and cried.... please check mine out and comment... xoxox....rock on to the marines!!!

That was an excellent poem. Good flow, and the rhymes weren't forced. Yet a very sad and touching story. Keep it up.

~rolo

thats so cute, thanks for fighting for our country..it means the us to me!

aw, great poem, i loced it so much! keep writing

Another wonderful write! and so heartfelt, i couldn't imagine not growing up with my mother by my side!

where are you mommy now that I'm a man
Ive struggled in life and Ive done the best I can
Ive done the best there is to make you proud
though Ill never be able to pick you outta the crowd

favorite lines right there, although i loved the whole poem. beautiful job! 5/5

Oh wow...
This brought tears to my eyes.
My favourite part was
I could still use you to show me the way
when the clouds wont part to a sun shining day

That really hit me, the emotion behind was so powerful.
You have a lot of talent, and your work is a joy to read.

I hope this isnt a thing u hav bn through such a sad an heartfelt poem 5/5 I hav read alot of your poems they are all gr8, sm times i read poems and wonder wat they are actually tryin 2 say but u really get ur point across keep writing coz i luv reading your wrk take care sarah x

What a sad poem, beautifully written. So much emotion in there, 5/5

Yeah i can relate...keep up the good work..