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  • 16 years ago

    by lifes big mistake

    this is really nice i liked this poem well done keep it up hope your ok
    lilkit xx

  • 16 years ago

    by jescelle

    i really like this one too hunnie.... keep up the awsome work! lyl
    jescelle

  • 16 years ago

    by amanda

    good poem hunn, I def like this one...but I hope your okay.... don't hurt yourself....

  • 16 years ago

    by Jordan

    wow...this poems intense. Personally I think it was very well written, and I think it was really good. I want to thank you for commenting on my bulimic poem. I know it took me a while to thank you, but It's been awhile. Anyway thanks again, and wonderful poem.
    Much Love,
    Jordan-Paige

  • 15 years ago

    by SEAN

    Wow kik ass poem

  • 15 years ago

    by Illusion

    I can relate to this poem.....I recently found out this guy that I had a crush on...for over two years had a crush on me (he told me)...umm, we almost has sex..and then I never heard from him again...I let him go...finally..then found a notebook under my bed.....all through-out it said "Chase, Mrs. Hunter....blah blah...I love Chase...." and for some reason it got to me...and he was put back in my head....

    I thought that was sort of what you meant...sorry if I wasn't right
    I really like this poem...I've put you on my favorites.

    Love
    DFK

  • 15 years ago

    by ZOMGEMO

    Hey... sorry it's taken me so long to read your poems, my internet was down last night... thanks for your comments by the way.

    Anyways... this poem is really good... i like the way you've repeated it and stuff, it flows well and has lots of emotion... 5/5 for sure :)

    Stay Strong ^_^

    *..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

  • 15 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Hi this is jayma the web site erased all my poems so i have to start all over!! but keep up the good work and please vote and comment on my poems again!!!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Hi this is jayma the web site erased all my poems so i have to start all over!! but keep up the good work and please vote and comment on my poems again!!!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Hi this is jayma the web site erased all my poems so i have to start all over!! but keep up the good work and please vote and comment on my poems again!!!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Hi this is jayma the web site erased all my poems so i have to start all over!! but keep up the good work and please vote and comment on my poems again!!!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sara

    Well written poem Danielle, Im not sure if you remember me, but you voted and commented on alot of my old poems, and I didn't know if I ever thanked you.. Awesome work, keep it up.. Take Care Sara

  • 14 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Aww, that was so beautifully written!And so touching, while reading your poem so many memories crossed my mind in just a few seconds...Anyway, i only can say, AWESOME!
    Keep it up!
    xxx

    ((...TILLmyLASTtearFALLS...))

  • 14 years ago

    by Keanna Hopkins

    That is just so well written girl!! you are an awesome writter! and im not just saying that! i'd love you read some of mine. the way you wrote that and told a sd hurtful story of emotions was brilliant. i expecially love the ending. keanna xx

  • 14 years ago

    by claire

    Wow. this is really amazing. i can relate, if not on that serious of a level. i need 2 stop writing things/names everywhere when i get into something/one - it always comes back to haunt me. i agree with keanna - the ending was brilliant.