wow...this poems intense. Personally I think it was very well written, and I think it was really good. I want to thank you for commenting on my bulimic poem. I know it took me a while to thank you, but It's been awhile. Anyway thanks again, and wonderful poem.
I can relate to this poem.....I recently found out this guy that I had a crush on...for over two years had a crush on me (he told me)...umm, we almost has sex..and then I never heard from him again...I let him go...finally..then found a notebook under my bed.....all through-out it said "Chase, Mrs. Hunter....blah blah...I love Chase...." and for some reason it got to me...and he was put back in my head....
I thought that was sort of what you meant...sorry if I wasn't right
I really like this poem...I've put you on my favorites.
That is just so well written girl!! you are an awesome writter! and im not just saying that! i'd love you read some of mine. the way you wrote that and told a sd hurtful story of emotions was brilliant. i expecially love the ending. keanna xx
Wow. this is really amazing. i can relate, if not on that serious of a level. i need 2 stop writing things/names everywhere when i get into something/one - it always comes back to haunt me. i agree with keanna - the ending was brilliant.