At first you were sweet

by Ashley   May 18, 2005


You say there something wrong with me
Hey you might be right
But have you ever tried to help me
If yes than it would be a lie
At first you were sweet so good I could eat
But later you became sour every minute of the hour
So will I try to over come my pain?
And all of what you put me through
I'm pretty sure I could
Yet at night I think that I did something wrong
Because you always made me feel like a sad song
So kisses and hugs to your past self
But revenge is what you deserve now
my love

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  • 18 years ago

    by AJ

    I love it. Very powerful. Excellent job. Thanks for the comment. 5/5

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