So sad, and so beautiful.

Man you write some awesome poems. I love your rhymes. The message is clear, but not too clear ( that's a good thing ).. keep writing! 5/5

I like how you make the flow of your poems chant like it gives these sad and depressing poems of yours such an eerie and mysterious flow. Your words yet again were powerful and held so much emotion within each. Each line kept me gripped. Short and powerful. Well done. Loved it. ~Mel