Undone

by N J Thornton   May 19, 2005


Suffocate my heart with mist
Pour sabre winds on my soul
Salute my mind with a hiss
Paint my innocence with coal

Cover my ears with beauty
Then let me taste your sins
Discuss me to your mirror
Where modesty never wins

So, ensure me all is well
Array how my body lies
Kiss the void upon my crib
With my spirit in your eyes

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  • 18 years ago

    by wendy

    Very good work i really enjoyed your work keep writing and keep smiling and also yes you were right about my poem and thank you for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I enjoyed this one alot, the word usage kept me interested and it all flowed well.
    It was brillient, I love dark poems :D

    well done x)

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    I really like this one great choice of words..5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Your poems are always brilliant! Great job keep up the amazing work! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Haleigh

    great poem ..lots of emotion in only 12 lines

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