And something new, you did try =) I don't like it as much as I love your love poems, but then again, I love how you went out of your way to try something new 5/5

keep it up
love,
Heather

Nice write. It's always good for a writer to expand his or her talent to new open ideas. I think you pulled it off. <3333

It's very interesting to read a new type of poetry from you! This was good, but I prefer your love poems....I really liked the last two lines! Very nice ending~Holly

Love your imagery, as always! Gives me a better understandin gof your poem, and in this case the situation you are in!
Kt xx