Cake Anyone?

by *~*Soldier Lover*~*   May 21, 2005


You don't even remember.

Did you even think for even a second about how bad it felt to be three and see mommy crying, and you slamming the door and not even looking back. I remember telling mommy; "Don't worry, it'll be ok. Daddy didn't mean it, don't cry mommy I love you." As I hugged her and wiped away her tears.

You don't even remember.

All those years you hollered, and I shed so many tears. That one night we had a fight, I don't even remember what about, and you hit my door through the wall. Did you even think for a second about how bad it would feel to be nine and see your dad slamming a door through the wall?

You don't even remember.

You can holler and scream all you want, even Eminem's got nothing on me. Three years left dad, then you'll never hear from me again. I'll disappear out of your line of vision. Flee from your reach and control. The sad thing to me is, not that you did it, but that.....

You don't even remember.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Releasing the hurt and anger through writing is always a plus to me. No one can tell you how to improve a poem with so much emotion behind it; that would be like telling someone how to feel.

    Good Job

    --Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Written with such deep emotion. A poem like this it's hard for someone to help you improve it. It came straight from your heart! You did a great job expressing how you really feel and that is a good release. Good work! Take Care! Brooke~