Wow that was amazing! I love your choice of words! You did an incredible job I really liked this one! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke

That was really great....I loved your love poem too but it wont let me comment...you rock...love you....thank god your okay! (i got really worried :P)...stay strong
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hey katie that was reli reli amazin. it was reli deep i loved it!!! 10/5 stay strong and keep writin xxx
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wow amazing poem! it flowed really well, i think it's a wonderful peom, it's on my favorite list!

~PLP~ lil slam~

Magical!Enchanting!I imagine it being sung by a children's choral symphony like the one on Streets, an music album...really great

wow, the way you choose and place the word in this poem, it's amazeing, very talented, very talented, I would of like to see some sort of life experience,emotion experience incorporated with this poem, the thing that stuck out the most was the words choosen, and placed, You know how to paint a picture and that's good to know how

Again, good poem...

Your vocabulary seems so great, and combined with your seemingly unlimited fantasy, it makes the perfect mix...

Once again, your poem flows well, and I found no trace of forced rhyme..

Sadly, I didn't really understand what it was about...

Could you enlighten me?

It is clear from your poetry that you have a vivid imagination to say the least! That's not a bad thing when used properly, whcih you seem to have down to the tee!

Keep Writing
Nici

woah...very imajinative....very beautiful....great job....5/5

wow very well written and beautiful in a dark way maybe you could really help my poems any comments on them

I really like this one as well, your vocabulary is amazing, and I love the way you describe thing to such detail.
Tho I didn't catch the meaning, I still enjoyed it.

I could feel what you wrote as I read. -- keep writing, you're good. <33 xoxo

very nice write
Unloved ♥

again, very well written! i hope to read more of your work in the future! keep it up!

That was a good poem! 5 Very good topic

This poem is so good! I really like your style and your choice of words...another 5 for you!

there u go again with the great imagry!!!! i hope u plan on having a career in writing .. u r amazing!! keep it up!!!

*~peace and love~*

Very beautiful,
an amazing imagiation,
keep it up!
(visit my poems if u want! kat-x-)
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