Cutting Deep

by Ian   May 21, 2005


He cut really deep last night
Crying so hard from that stupid fight
Shoulders are in so much pain
Hurts even more while he sees the rain

The rain reminds of the pain he put her through
Now that he’s cut he feels so blue
He realizes now that he’s turning into the people that he hates
Then realizes how much he wants to date

He cuts again on the other side this time
Opens up a notebook full of his rhymes
He cries aloud not knowing what to do next
Regretting everything he has ever done including the sex

Screams good-bye one last time
Searching his book of death rhymes
And then just dies
They find him and no one cries

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  • 19 years ago

    by pebbles holliday

    I use to till i met the love of my life but then i have to leave him for some school!! i love rj tompson so much

  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    wow thats really touching..so sad...kinda a tear jerker...well keep up the work
    take care,
    -victoria

  • 20 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    This is a great poem. I cut too, but learned that my life shouldn't end that way it is too painful to die that way.
    If you ever need so to talk to about cutting ask me about. You might not no me, but believe I can understand what you are going through.
    My e-mail address is Lil_tease_4_u@hotmail.com
    Eventhough I am younger than you doesn't mean I can't help!
    Heather

  • 20 years ago

    by Dianna M Tuohy

    Fantastic job on this, really. 5/5

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