Cuts around the wrist

by Ian   May 21, 2005


He can't sleep tonight
Just got into another fight
He just wanted to see her one last time
So he made this poem and made sure it would rhyme

He misses her dearly but he doesn’t think she cares
but he loves how he sees his to be so fair
it's 8:52 and he wants to call
but reaching for the phone he falls

He gets up but now its to late
He already asked her twice for a date
He knows he can't have her for she’s taken
But he is teared up and shaken

He cuts down and across
making the sign of the cross
He misses her so freaking much
but he knows all those feelings must be a crush

He recognizes now all that he has lost
but pauses for a sec and begins to scratch at the cross
Blood trickles down his shoulder
Then he breathes in and feels so much colder

He cuts across again but on his leg
The girl on the phone begins to beg
She says what he is doing is crazy
But insanity is in the eye of the be holder you see

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  • 20 years ago

    by Ian

    Lindsay,
    I thank you for you comment but you don't have to worry about it happening it is just my mindset and I write when angry.

  • 20 years ago

    by Lindsay

    hey, i just read your poem, and i really hope this isnt happening to you! if so dont do this no one is worth that sort of pain..stay strong.
    Even though its not a nice poem you rit it with alot of feeling and it gave the poem alot of tension and atmosphere...keep believing and living! well done mate!

    Linds xxx